Elven Ranger (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} nightswhisper) wrote in silverharmony, |
This was definately a nice little story! I honestly didn't see any real problems. It flowed quite nicely and no grammatical things jumped out.
It was also very in character. It's a nice shot at perhaps how Momo copes with the day. I love it!
It was also very in character. It's a nice shot at perhaps how Momo copes with the day. I love it!
